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The tale of the Kitin egg
The tale of the Kitin egg.
It was quite and sunny day on Atys, the Ybers were flying around slowly, Yubos roamed nearby and the Messabs was lowing as in chorus. Nidim was wandering about as she usually did when there were no learning time of fighting training. She often strolled along the beaches and it was not unusual for her to take longer trips away to see what was behind the next corner or hill. For a girl at her age she was quite widely-travelled compared to her friends. But there was always some place to go for her, with or without her parents consent. But as she always had the good habit of returning home safely they often had indulgence with her curiosity. There was an area that was not far off from Windermeer where she lived, and there had recently been a large battle there. She had thought of it for a day since her father had come home and told the family all about the battle that had taken place there. The battle itself was not so far away, Bounty Beached was the place, and had thus been important for the safety of the nearby Homins. It had been a smaller swarm of Kitins, Kinchers to be precise, that had reached the lands and was probably scouting for new habitats. Yet they had been discovered by scouting Homins that had reported back that a threat was nearby. Nidim was curious about this battlefield. She had never seen one before and the place was just at the outskirts of the areas she had explored. The thrill in finding new frontiers had been too overwhelming and she had decided to travel to this place to see the place of the battle and to expand her knowledge of the Atysian lands. She had said good bye as usual but without letting them know that she had packed a little heavier lunch on purpose and set off towards Sandy Workshop to take the path that lead along the side, behind the waterfall, up to the plateau where the giant best shape was standing. Being accustomed with the route she was soon passing the beast shape and headed for the sea covered under the roots where the portal was. She had found it some time back, but had not yet passed through it and had a full time exploring the surroundings. But now she was to pass through it and travel to Bounty Beaches where her next destination was. Said and done she stepped through the portal being ready to throw herself back through it if the other side proved to be too hostile for her. It was calm and nice. Musmere Workshop was were she was headed, according to her father this is where they had fought the days before and it had to be there she could find the remains. To get there was not as easy as walking, some foul animals did roam nearby but she was , for her age, well traveled and skilled in avoiding them. Seems as the sneaking she did on the Messabs and Ybers payed off as she was almost unable to he heard as she snuck past some Raguses and Torbaks. They did not make a hint of knowing that she was so close by, and the wind was also on her side carrying her scent away from them. Finally she reached what she aimed for, she stood at the workshop looking at the devastation and could only begin to imagine the mayhem that had taken place here. She rummaged through the piles of things that were spread out as they had struggled. The Homins that had fallen had been taken care of and moved to the healers quarters where they were tended for. Yet the bodies of the fallen Kinchers had been left where they fell and only the usable items had been brought back to the town crafters. But still the area thrilled her and told its own tale for her as she walked there. Suddenly she hit something with her foot and looked down. It was a strangely shaped object, it seemed so fragile, yet still durable to withstand most things. But what was it ?. She decided that it would make a fine item to bring back home as memory and to investigate. So she placed it in her pack and headed back home, there was no need to spend time in such hostile place for now. The way back was as easy as it was for her to get there, wind was on her side and the Torbaks and Raguses was still unknowing that she was sneaking by not far off them. As she reached the tunnel to the portal something touched her side, quickly she turned around to see what it was. She was most certain that nothing had noticed her and that she was not followed, but still there was nothing there. Then it touched her again, and nothing was there. Then she understood that it was her pack that had done it and she quickly threw it off her and stepped away from it. Her pack was lying on the ground, and suddenly it started moving again, this time it did not stop moving and as she looked at it she noticed that whatever it was it was slowly crawling out of the bag. She readied herself with her dagger and was prepared to either defend herself or to dash away from there towards the portal. As it came closer to the opening the sweat began to crawl from her forehead down on her face and fall off from her chin. What was it ? As it found the opening of her pack she gave it a good look. It was hard to describe, it did almost look like a clopper, it had almost the kind of legs. But no claws or color that resembled a clopper. It was brownish and had something looking like a neck where its head was and from the head there was two small arms or such alike. As it reached the light of the sun it gave of a silent whispering whistling sound and it was as if the strong light blinded it. She made a short whistle to see if she could catch its attention. It turned in the direction from where it had heard the whistle, if it was a natural reaction of it it was just moving towards where there was activity she did not know, still she continued. And soon they had approached each other to where they could touch. She sat down on her knees as the creature came closer. She still didn't know if it could see her or if it felt her scent or followed some other way then the sound to find her. As it came close it bumped into her knees it made a small halt, then it almost looked up at her face and quickly climbed up in her knee. It just sat there as it was looking around and she was so amazed that it had done what it did that she just sat there looking at it. All her fright for it was as blown away. She slowly reached for her pocket where she had some food and then extended it to the little thing in her knee. After a little while, it was very reserved about what she had given to it, but after a moment it began chewing on it and ate more and more. Once it had begun to eat it did not take long until it had eaten whole her lunch. And the day had slowly turned into afternoon and she had to return soon as there were chores that needed her attention. She gently placed the little creature on the ground and it ran away. She had marked where she had been in her mind and decided that she should return the coming days to further explore the surroundings near the portal as it was a safe place to be. So she returned home. The coming weeks she returned to the portal almost every day and she soon got to know to bring extra food for almost every day the little creature returned to her to eat and as it had grown a bit it started to play with her a little. As if it was testing what it was capable of doing. It was fun, she enjoyed the company of the little thing as it followed her around and sometimes started to play with her when it felt bored. So it went on for a few months. The creature grew with an amazing speed. And soon it was about half her height, if not bigger. As it grew it also got stronger and stronger and soon it was almost to tough when it was playing with her, yet as if it understood its own strength she got the notion that it was holding back. Months passed and as they did she saw less and less of her little friend. Yet still she grew more confident and was taken by her travels she though of it less. Still it was a bit lonely sometimes not having it there to disturb her. A years time had passed now and she had grown bigger and more secure of herself and with this been allowed to make longer treks. She often spend her time in Bounty Beaches for its surroundings. But she was still not really allowed to be there by her parents and she had often told them that she was sitting under the beast shape. One day she was strolling around and found an interesting stone and she sat down to look at it. Experience brings many things, and one bad treat is the false safety, and this she had this day as she had not been as careful as usual. And the wind had carried her scent in the direction of some Torbak's. They had snuck up behind her as she was sitting and looking at the stone and soon they found themselves close enough to attack. She was quite skilled in combat, this from hard practicing, but some times it does not matter how well you fight when you are outnumbered. And this was such time. She dodged and evaded as much as she could but as she turned in attempt to run away a bite took the strength from one of her legs and she fell. Sitting down she wielded her knife as her best to get them to move away. It was fruitless and soon the thought of a horrific death reached her mind. The last thing she saw was a Torbak jumping at her and then all became black. Moments later she heard a soft whistling sound as she opened her eyes. Was she still alive ? And from where did that sound come ?. She looked around her, there were two Torbak's lying aside her, both whoms life was claimed by someone. She sat up and by doing so she noticed something was behind her and she turned around. There stood what she had learned was a Kincher, such one that her father had fought against over a year ago. His words of its foulness and evil and she thought that had she survived just to fall in such death ? It just stood there looking at her before it walked towards her. She was stiff of fear and dared not to move as it approached her. When it was by her side it stopped and slowly leaned towards her leg, did it smell the scent of her blood ? Then it started to push her on her pack. It then became apparent to her, this giant beast in front of her was the little creature that had followed her so much a year ago as they had become friends. And now it had not only came to her again but it had also spared her life from an ill faith the Torbak's could have brought her. She smiled and petted it on its head as she, with some struggle and pain, got her lunchpack and handed half of it to the Kincher. After it had grabbed the food and gladly chewed it she felt that the place was not safe, whom knows where the wind might have brought in her direction. She tried to stand up up it was hard, the leg burned in pain and she could not use it to walk. Even now it was a great friendship as the Kincher stepped up by her side and let her lean on it, a year ago it had proved its strength as it had pushed her from behind ending up carrying her around a bit before she had fell of laughing, and now let her find support by its presence. After some struggle she found herself leaning towards the wall and the Kincher stood there looking at her, then looking around. Time went by, she became weaker as the blood poured slowly from her leg. She had placed a bandage on it the best she could but had not stopped the blood completely. She thought that it would be a slow sleep. Voices ? Where and whoms ? "There, watch for that foul Kincher, slay it if need be, chase it off !" A male voice said not far off. She opened her eyes and to her joy she saw that some Homins came traveling along the wall. She was saved. Yet there was something that was needed to be done and she looked at the Kincher and said : "Thank you my friend, I will be fine now. Please hurry away for they do not know you as I do." The Kincher made a silent whistling sound before it moved off towards the middle plains and the Homins. They found her quite in time and was able to tend her wounds a little better so that she would manage to follow them home. She had much to explain but that was not important now. Just before they reached the tunnel to the portal she stopped and looked behind her. There in the distant was a shape of a Kincher. And as she smiled at it and waved it leaned its head back and bellowed a loud roar. Many did not believe her when she told what had happened, other saw this as a good tale to tell the children. Still it was then later said due to this : "Friends, no matter what they are, never forgets about each other." // Drakfot
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Join Date: Sep 2004
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Re: The tale of the Kitin egg
brilliant story as always Drakfot, thanks so much for sharing with all of us
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I don't usually reply to stories posted here, but I must say its a good one Drakfot, thanks for sharing
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Join Date: Sep 2005
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Re: The tale of the Kitin egg
woow nice story thank you for sharing indeed
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Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: UK
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Re: The tale of the Kitin egg
I do love your stories Drak
This one is as wonderful as ever. |
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Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: UK
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Re: The tale of the Kitin egg
Lovely story, well told. I like it alot.
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